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36CREATIVE WRITING YEAR 4Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to you because I feel it is unfair that in football men have lots of advantages which women don%u2019t get.Firstly, men get paid at least %u00a330,000,000 more than women. Even though they both do the same job! This isn%u2019t right because women should always get treated the same as men.Secondly, men%u2019s stadiums get a lot fuller than women%u2019s stadiums; going back to money, this makes men richer. It%u2019s nicer to see more people watching football - it makes you feel more important. Thirdly, the facilities; women%u2019s stadiums are smaller and they also get fewer training facilities than men. Women won%u2019t get better at football if they aren%u2019t allowed to train as hard as men.MAKE WOMEN EQUAL TO MEN!Yours faithfully,A disgruntled High March pupil.P.S. This must be done by the end of next football season.Dear neighbour,As you know we all love to have some loud music every now and again. However, the neighbours and I think it would be better if you didn%u2019t play the music so regularly. I know how fond you are of your radio but once I have given you my reasons, I%u2019m almost sure you will change your mind.Do you really think that if you keep the music on full blast all night you will get a good night%u2019s sleep? It is proven that the more sleep you get, the better you feel the next day. How could anyone live with sleepless night after sleepless night?If you carry on playing your music that loudly every day, you could end up losing your hearing. You won%u2019t be able to hear your music even quietly, let alone at high volume. You have your grandchildren to think about. If you don%u2019t stop now, you will regret it for the rest of your life!Also, loud music can be very distressing to pets and animals nearby. I%u2019m sure that your pet cat Whiskers is thinking the same thing.So, please take this into consideration. I%u2019m sure all the neighbours will be very grateful. If you are still not convinced then you can at least turn the sound down. Yours sincerely,An unhappy High March pupil.Dear Mr Thompson, I am writing to you about you and your rhino killing crew! it is an absolute wicked thing to do - they are beautiful creatures soon to become extinct! Firstly, I would like to talk to you about the reason they are killed. In actual fact, they are only used for the ivory in their horn and their skin. This is terrible! if you were a rhino, would you like to be killed only for your skin and horns? Isn%u2019t nature better than beauty?Secondly, I would like to speak to you about your behaviour. It is wicked and selfish and it is not fair on the rhinos. What if they had babies? They would be left to suffer, maybe even to die. How would you feel if you were left to die? Finally, I have already told you that rhinos are very nearly extinct. One or more rhinos are killed every day and their babies will die because they don%u2019t have anyone to protect them and feed them. I am disgusted, absolutely disgusted by this situation. Yours sincerely, A caring High March pupil.Wooburn Green Bucks Department of Highways 56 Apple Road Blackberry Green BucksHP11 UBXTo whom it may concern, I am writing to you because of all the potholes on Wooburn Green%u2019s hill.I am sure that everyone who drives down the hill into Wooburn Green goes in 50% of the potholes when driving. It can really damage cars%u2019 tyres and the car itself let alone the people inside who could really hurt their heads when it gets bumpy. Why would you possibly want to hurt people?Secondly, when people cross the road to go to the fields or woods they walk in the potholes and could really hurt themselves e.g. twist their ankles, blood pouring from cut knee etc. Thirdly if you sorted out the potholes properly instead of just putting a slab of tarmac on top of the potholes, they wouldn%u2019t reappear in no time at all!I do hope my arguments have made you realise the dangers of potholes.Yours Sincerely, A concerned High March resident, Wooburn Green.Dear Mrs Gater,As you know, some of us really want a class pet. I am writing to you to ask if we can get a class pet.Firstly, we%u2019ve been working really hard in lessons doing the best we can and if there%u2019s a class pet it might encourage us to work even harder!Secondly, everyone in the school loves animals and it would teach us to look after the pet and give it the treatment that it requires. Some of us don%u2019t have siblings and are bored at home, so a class pet would be a little friend and something to do on the weekends.Thirdly, a pet will give people comfort. It will help people with ADHD to be calm and relaxed and they won%u2019t have as much stress when they%u2019re doing homework.We would all be delighted to get a class pet and it will make us very happy. You do want us to be happy, right? If we do get a class pet, can we please get a guinea pig? I strongly believe that it would be a great honour to get a class pet.Yours sincerely,A hopeful Year 4 pupil.